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Rebkeh

(2,450 posts)
Sun Jan 31, 2016, 04:45 AM Jan 2016

Ode to Americans

Last edited Sun Jan 31, 2016, 11:29 AM - Edit history (1)

My "together" post. #notmeus

Ode to Americans

Because you believe your prosperity depends on my poverty,
Your hope depends on my hopelessness.
Because you behave as if your wellness depends on my illness,
Your joy depends on my despair.
Because your life of privilege depends on my life of inequality,
Your sense of security depends on my lack of it.
Because you were taught that your life matters more,
My life is perceived to matter less.
Because your power depends on my powerlessness,
Empathy cannot find its way in.

But I know.
I remember a well-known “secret,”
That zero-sum is a mirage.
Because I am you,
You are me.
My life is tied up in yours.

If only you could bother to seek,
To seek through eyes of love rather than eyes that fear.
With curiosity instead of contempt,
With clarity instead of confusion.
With courage instead of indifference.

Your success need not depend on my failure.
Your pleasure need not depend on my pain.
A plus for one need not depend on loss for another,
Because a loss for one is a loss for all.

You say the fittest survive - alone,
But I know better.
I know the cooperative thrive - together.

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Ode to Americans (Original Post) Rebkeh Jan 2016 OP
Stunning...read this MrChuck Jan 2016 #1
Did you write this? It's beautiful! ErisDiscordia Jan 2016 #2
I did and I will. Thank you Rebkeh Jan 2016 #7
That is beautiful. pugetres Jan 2016 #3
Beautiful and so true. Yes, publish it widely!! flor-de-jasmim Jan 2016 #4
Or better yet, do a YouTube video. Bet it would go viral n/t eridani Feb 2016 #8
I'm not a natural speaker Rebkeh Feb 2016 #10
Musician or poet friends? eridani Feb 2016 #11
I've been thinking about that Rebkeh Feb 2016 #12
I know a singer. Lives on Orcas Island in WA State eridani Feb 2016 #13
great! mhatrw Jan 2016 #5
K&R LiberalElite Jan 2016 #6
Fantastic. Thank you for this. We can create this reality. nt raouldukelives Feb 2016 #9
Kick. artislife Feb 2016 #14

Rebkeh

(2,450 posts)
10. I'm not a natural speaker
Mon Feb 1, 2016, 02:23 PM
Feb 2016

so a video would have to be done by someone reading it. I don't know who that would be.

Rebkeh

(2,450 posts)
12. I've been thinking about that
Tue Feb 2, 2016, 01:02 PM
Feb 2016

I don't actually have a lot of friends, not like that. There are some, like Prince Ea that come to mind but he does his own work. My brother is a musician, I could ask him.

Do you know any poet/speakers?

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