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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:33 AM Original message |
please review my latest ltte re: poverty before I publish... |
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suston96 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:35 AM Response to Original message |
1. Good writing. Two spaces after a period. nt |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:39 AM Response to Reply #1 |
2. Thanks...done. |
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Contrary1 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:46 AM Response to Reply #2 |
3. Extra space after commas? |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:47 AM Response to Reply #3 |
4. LOL...obviously-I need the help. |
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Contrary1 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:49 AM Response to Reply #4 |
5. No...I meant that *I* was getting too old to remember my grammar school lessons. |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:50 AM Response to Reply #5 |
6. hehe-change that to "we" and I'll agree. |
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Greyhound (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:31 PM Response to Reply #1 |
19. Not since typewriter ribbons were widely used. n/t |
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RKP5637 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 11:54 AM Response to Original message |
7. It looks good to me when the changes are added... n/t |
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bobbolink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 12:00 PM Response to Original message |
8. All I see is the need for space after commas. |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 12:02 PM Response to Reply #8 |
9. thank you...I have corrected things on my rough draft |
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bobbolink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 12:54 PM Response to Reply #9 |
10. Great! |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:21 PM Response to Reply #10 |
13. lol...I'll leave the "draft correcting" to you.I'll take care of the medical stuff... |
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pinboy3niner (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:11 PM Response to Original message |
11. Another excellent letter, w8liftinglady! |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:14 PM Response to Reply #11 |
12. Thanks,bro-barton ought to love this one... |
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bobbolink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:32 PM Response to Original message |
14. One nit.... |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:42 PM Response to Reply #14 |
16. yeah-I saw that,too..I changed to |
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bobbolink (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:50 PM Response to Reply #16 |
17. Very good. Pretend I didn't say anything, because it is really good, and you were waay ahead of us. |
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billlll (434 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 01:40 PM Response to Original message |
15. Love it! |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:18 PM Response to Reply #15 |
18. Thank you!I'm lucky the editor loves "meaty" letters...it sells papers... |
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Greyhound (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:32 PM Response to Original message |
20. "...a real crisis is entrenching Texas." I don't think entrenching is the right word, |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:39 PM Response to Reply #20 |
21. yeah-I have trouble with that sometimes-this is the definition I used |
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Greyhound (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:51 PM Response to Reply #21 |
22. Perhaps "is entrenched" would work better? |
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w8liftinglady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-19-10 04:52 PM Response to Reply #22 |
23. I appreciate the input-the message is hidden if the grammer is poor... |
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