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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:04 PM
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Writing my first ever letter to the editor regarding the 'Tea Party'
Edited on Mon Jun-07-10 12:58 PM by TheWarIzaLie
If anyone has any suggestions I would appreciate your input! Ok, so here's my rough draft..


Crashing the Party

There has been alot of talk lately about the 'Tea Party' movement and what they're about. Since we seem to have a nice dialog going here, I feel obligated to chime in with a few thoughts.

First off, I feel I lend some credibility to the matter as one who Voted for President Obama in the last election but often scathes him on his POLICIES and whom, next time, will be casting a write in vote for one of the half dozen or so politicians we have whom I feel actually looks out for the American people. With that being said, here's my problem with this group. When it comes to credibility, they have none!

As Mr. Gary Logan makes obvious here, 'Try to learn something about them before you criticize them' (June 7) this astroturf movement had zero complaints and make no apologies for the Cheney/Bush crime spree our country endured, but is still reeling from. 'Constitutional Government Conservatives' huh? Where were your gatherings and protests when the last administration decided the rule of law did not apply to them and the constitution could be ignored when it didn't agree with their radical policies?

Just scratching the surface, here's a short list of atrocities to refresh our memories:

Thwarting congressional oversight with over 100 presidential 'signing statements' declaring they didn't have to govern by the law if they didn't want to.

Massive warentless wiretapping and data mining of all Americans, sneak and peak searches and seizures of any and all of our property, electronic data, and personal information.. 'Yea, don't tread on me!'

The ability to detain VERIFIABLE AMERICAN CITIZENS on a whim indefinitely, without being charged of a crime and with no right to seek legal council.. Oh and if Cheney was bored to go ahead and torture them! Yeah, R.I.P. Habeas Corpus, was nice knowing you Constitution!

And where was the tea party at? Thats right, they were hanging out at the RNC, mocking the sacrifice of the 10's of thousands or more of our wounded troops that the Cheney/Bush war profiteering cable's lies created by wearing purple heart band-aids and screaming 4 more years! Which brings me to the final point I would like to make.

Mr. Logan employs a very common conservative tactic of provoking an emotional backlash when encouraging us to 'remember our kids- kids will be paying for this long after we're dead'. Thats the same thing many of us were saying when Mr. Bush decided to loot our treasury and launch an illegitimate war for profit against a peoples who never attacked us in Iraq. We're now in year 8 of this quagmire which has come at a cost of over 4000 American lives and roughly 35-40 billion dollars a month. And lets not forget that the Bush tax cuts, that primarily only benefited the already richest 5% of Americans, came with the hefty price tag of 2 trillion dollars. Both of which of course also went on our children's credit card to the communist chinese!

So to act like Bush merely left us an 800 million dollar debt, and every things that evil ol' Obamas fault makes me think.. I'll pass on whatever's in the tea your drinking!
Sincerely, Keelan Dougherty. Ridgeley
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petersjo02 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:22 PM
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1. Word thing
Edited on Mon Jun-07-10 12:24 PM by petersjo02
"Cheney/Bush war profiteering cable's lies created"

I think the word you're looking for here is cabal. "A cabal is a number of people greater than two together in some close design, usually to promote their private views and interests in a church, state, or other community, often by..." as per Wikipedia.

Edited typo
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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:26 PM
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2. Dam, I missed that. Thanks
Also if anyone has more precise numbers on the cost of the Bush tax cuts, that would be great! Im pretty sure I low balled it b/I don't recal the exact numbers off the top of my head. Just know it's astounding.
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JHB Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 09:21 AM
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12. As long as we're spell-checking...
...it's "warrantless" wiretapping, as in lacking a warrant from a judge.
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pinboy3niner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:39 PM
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3. What are your newspaper's guidelines on length?
Most don't have space for long letters. Many will do a limited amount of editing for length if they think a particular letter is unique. There are exceptions--WaPo once ran a very long letter I wrote, editing out only one graf. That's very rare, however.

Look at their guidelines and the length of letters that are actually published. If you're within those, fine. If not, shortening your letter will give you a better chance of being published.

Good luck! And welcome to DU!

:hi:

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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:52 PM
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5. Can't find any guidlines on the webpage
However, They seem to let some pretty long rants slide bye fairly often so Im crossing my fingers.
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pinboy3niner Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 01:51 PM
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6. Here are some generic guidelines
The L.A. Times recently asked readers to send in questions about how letters are screened, selected and edited, and Letters Editor Eryn Brown replied. Here are some excerpts (Note: not all of my snips are indicated):


The tough truth: Snail-mail letters don't have much chance of being published. Typically, I wait two to three days (and up to a week) to publish letters responding to a story. But it sometimes takes a week for hard-copy letters to find their way to The Times' mail room and, after screening, to my desk. If you want your letter to be published, your best bet is to send it as an e-mail.

What are the criteria by which letters are selected for publication?

Many readers assume that letters are chosen to promote a political agenda. This is not the case.

Generally, I try to publish letters that reflect the mix of letters we receive. If a story or subject generates a lot of response, I work to include a good number of letters about that subject on the page. I also try to choose letters that reflect the points of view expressed in the letters received. If we get a dozen letters slamming an editorial about, say, the stimulus package, and only one or two in praise, I try to run a preponderance of "con" letters and maybe just one "pro."

Other factors come into play too. As the letters guidelines state, we do not run letters that are obscene, that contain factual falsehoods, that are part of letter-writing campaigns, that are unsigned or signed with a pseudonym, or that run much longer than 150 words. We require that letters respond to stories that have appeared in The Times. And with a few rare exceptions, we publish letter writers only once every 90 days.
<snip>

Then the fun begins. From those that remain, I pick the letters that I find most illuminating, articulate and entertaining. I like letters with attitude, as well as letters that bring new information or a surprising perspective to a discussion. Generally, I do not like letters written by people who "dare" me to print them, or who otherwise act like third-graders. I try to strike a balance between in-state and out-of-state writers (with a slight preference for local readers) and between "experts" and "regular folks" (with a slight preference for the "regular folks").

Do you automatically discard letters that are over the 150-word limit?

No -- just as we also don't automatically discard letters when writers have forgotten to include their city of residence or their phone number (which we use only to verify a writer's identity). Rather, if they seem like good candidates for the page, I will cut them to an appropriate length. I also edit for clarity, correcting grammar and diction where appropriate.

That said, I have to work quickly, and a very long letter is a less-appealing candidate than a succinct one.


http://www.latimes.com/news/opinion/la-le-lettersfactory-2009apr11,0,7865765.htmlstory
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OregonBlue Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jun-07-10 12:47 PM
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4. Another word thing, last paragraph, whatever's not whatevers
Letter is good but I agree you need to find out number of words allowed by you paper and if it's too long, edit it yourself so they won't do it for you and miss your points.
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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 08:41 AM
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7. Okay, heres my revised edition
Edited on Tue Jun-08-10 08:54 AM by TheWarIzaLie
Sorry folks, I'm just tickled to death with myself here and thought I'd share. Still a bit long winded, but our local paper often prints longer letters to the editor than this and it has been a hot topic here of late. Hence I'm feeling pretty optimistic on my chances here..

Anywho, here is the revised as follows;


Crashing the Party


There has been a lot of talk about the 'Tea Party' and what they're about. So I feel obligated to chime in w/ a few thoughts.

I feel I lend some credibility to the conversation as one who voted for President Obama but often scathes him on legitimate POLICY matters, and whom will be casting a write-in vote in protest come 2012. With that being said, heres my issue w/ this group. Aside from their astounding ignorance and often racist tone.. They have no credibility!

As Mr. Gary Logan clearly highlights for us, "Try to learn something about them before you criticize them" (June7) this astroturf movement had no qualms, and make no apologies for the Cheney/Bush imperial crime spree our country suffered through and is still reeling from. The last administration spent money like drunken sailors w/ a stolen credit card, and ran roughshod all over our now meaningless Constitution! While many of us were horrified and screaming fire!, This group which now calls themselves 'Tea Baggers' were telling us that we were tare-ist lovers and that it's treasonous to question our Commander in Chief during wartime! My, how things change.

Where were these folks when our federal government began, just to scratch the surface, engaging in: Massive warentless wiretapping and data-mining of all Americans across the board? Yeah, 'don't tread on me!' : Detaining American citizens, on a whim, w/out being charged of a crime, and w/ no right to legal counsel? So long Habeas Corpus, adios Constitution!

I'll tell you where they were. They were hanging out at the RNC mocking our veterans sacrifices by wearing purple heart band-aids, and chanting 4 more years!

You say Bush only left us a debt of 800 million, then want to employ that shallow conservative straw man.. 'Gee, think of the kids!'?
The same thing was said when Bush took out our children's credit card to the communist Chinese and gave trillions in tax cuts, primarily, to the already richest 5% , then launched a murderous war for profit in Iraq in which we're being milked to the tune of 40 billion a month! I guess you can ignore all that when you live in the fact free bubble of Faux 'News' and nonstop, conservative, ditto head am radio (hiya Dave).

So as for me, I'll pass on whatever's in the 'tea' these people are drinking!
Sincerely, Keelan Dougherty. Ridgeley



Also, if you must, flame away if you don't like that Obama isn't getting my vote again. But he won't win WV anyhow so whats it matter?
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ProfessorGAC Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 08:47 AM
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9. Just Trying To Help Here
2nd paragraph, you have 1212 as the voting year, not 2012.

In your 4th paragraph before your "adios" line, it should be legal "counsel" not "council".

Everything else you fixed already.
GAC

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Skidmore Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 08:43 AM
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8. You may wish to find some stats on how small a representation of the public
that the Teabaggers are in reality and reference that. They are the tail that wags the dog.
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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 08:57 AM
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10. Thanks
This is why I come here, lots of smart people with interesting ideas :fistbump:
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kctim Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 09:17 AM
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11. Um
This is more of an anti Bush/Cheney letter than one regarding the Tea Party. In fact, the only thing you ask about the Tea Party is "where were they?"

Sorry, but you're opinions about the Patriot Acts, the wars, tax cuts and the debt will only be met with more opinions. IF you really want to "crash the party," then use facts to address why they are wrong about raising taxes, the debt and more govt programs.
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TheWarIzaLie Donating Member (73 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jun-08-10 10:38 AM
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13. Yea your right about that
however, this is in response to a gentleman who claims that the tea party are these great defenders of the constitution and that Bush only left us with 800 million in debt and the rest is all Obama's because of the stimulus and health care bills, and his out of control spending. I feel it's valid to remind people just who these frauds really are and what they thought was 'good government'.

It's the same Republican ditto head weenies who watch Fox and vote (R) every election. Tea Party is just a shiny new name they use to try and sound like they're Independents in my opinion.

Your point is valid but I still believe they deserve and should have the stinking rotten Bush/Cheney corpse wrapped around their necks whenever the opportunity presents itself.
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