Can i get your opinion on this?

[lame54]

http://youtube.com/watch?v=kR2amWYRXV0
i was asked by a friend of a friend to come up with a short commercial for
for his new website
does this ad make you want to visit the site?
and what message did you get out of it?
i'm trying to see if i clearly communicated the message

[ClayZ]

1. Well done, lame54!

[Vincardog]

2. The message I get is jr wants to be a Dick TATerTOT, BBV can be and has been hacked and PAPER

Ballots and hand counts are the answer. Two sites looked like sponsors and I did not know what you wanted me to do next.

Might I suggest you end with a command like

Click here now
to take action?

[gateley]

3. That should run on TV! Great job!! nt