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Steel City Slim Donating Member (410 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-16-05 12:01 PM
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The Truce
The Truce

He signed the truce
He was only a private, but he signed the truce anyway
It was just between him and them
No longer would he fire his gun at them
And no longer would they fire their guns at him
He signed the truce in blood
His blood
The truce became effective the instant the bullet tore into his chest
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pinerow Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-16-05 12:35 PM
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1. Dang....that is pretty powerful stuff...
nt
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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-17-05 01:19 PM
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2. Excellent
Peace.
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue May-17-05 01:49 PM
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3. no words
you poem said it all
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KaliTracy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri May-20-05 11:05 PM
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4. powerful. both in image and in content.
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