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GoddessOfGuinness Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Jul-25-06 11:30 PM
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I'll try posting this poem here...
Death sometimes comes in a dream
Holding me tenderly,
Whisp'ring the delights awaiting me
In that ineluctable euphoria.

Too soon, when my waking nears,
His lips caress my cheek,
And Death gently implores my patience;
Despite my desire, it is not yet my time.

The dream...the sweetness of it
Loiters around my heart
Until my mind begins to wonder
If I'll have to nag him to take out the trash.
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-26-06 04:40 PM
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1. Nice poem Goddess
One in which dreams fade quickly into reality.

It is garbage day on my street today also.

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GoddessOfGuinness Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-26-06 04:44 PM
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2. Trash is least fun when it gets hot and humid outside!
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oneighty Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-26-06 05:19 PM
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3. Life forms in agreeable weather
via a miraculous spontaneous generation process spring forth and soon become the trash.

All of it.

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GoddessOfGuinness Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Jul-26-06 05:32 PM
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4. In it's turn, trash mulches the earth,
making new life and new growth possible. :D
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NMMNG Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-28-06 12:26 AM
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5. Nice work
:applause:
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Tom Yossarian Joad Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-28-06 05:24 PM
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6. Nice! Gave me chills and not many do that.
Have you been reading Donne again?
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JitterbugPerfume Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Jul-29-06 11:55 AM
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7. thanks
that is a very nice poem!
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PretzelzRule Donating Member (402 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Thu Aug-17-06 02:09 AM
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8. Very good!
Thanks for sharing; I like that very much. I am part of a fledgling writing group in my town that gets together and shares poetry we've written...I hope to soon be writing as well as you do. :)
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-21-06 07:26 PM
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9. My dear GoddessOfGuinness!
Very nice indeed!

I love the twist at the end!

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