Haikus for today? Who's in?

[NRaleighLiberal]

I will start in gently....


Getting close, getting nasty
punch and counterpunch
Who is the true enemy?

McCain must be quite happy
So much wasted time
When he should be the target

[ithinkmyliverhurts]

1. Here's mine. I'l use 5-7-5 syllable count.

Bang, bang, bang, bang, bang.
Bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang, bang.
Bang, bang, bang, bang, bang.

[Bluebear]

4. A poor attempt there/Incendiary and lame/Keep your day job, please.

[ithinkmyliverhurts]

7. I so wish I could

keep my lowly job
but george bush sucks ass

[Bluebear]

2. Obama won it. Isn't that enough for you? Why must there be blood?

[Paulie]

3. i'll play

The cloud sinks lower
Looks dark and stormy
Rays of change still shine

[Renaissance Man]

5. Here's mine.

The campaign was mine
My foot is stuck in my mouth
Shoot him already

[Bluebear]

6. I loaned myself cash/only to put my foot in/What was I thinking?

[QC]

8. OK, I'll give it a shot.

FUCK! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK! FUCK!
Indignation junkies shout.
Hope and unity!

[Bluebear]

11. A "shot " you wrote here??? What are you encouraging??? Assassination!!!!11

[QC]

14. OMG! You have found me out! n/t

[woo me with science]

9. Okay.

Hill will kill Barack.
Michelle will scratch Bill's eyes out.
Women scare us so.

[blitzen]

10. Assassination/Once in a generation/Her only real hope.

[CaptJasHook]

12. Okay

Ebony and ivory
go together in perfect...
DU dissonance


Rainbow in the sky
All the colors, beautiful
Clinton casts a cloud

[Duke Newcombe]

13. Hill: Obama might not make it/Bobby Kennedy bang bang/I deserve my turn

That is all.

Duke

[ballsalicious]

15. hmmmm...here goes:

a once respected leader
has fallen from grace
of the ladder, flat on her face

(mines kind of a haiku limerick)

[GoesTo11]

16. For Our Girl.

Hillary, you ___
Don't go talking RFK
Just go away now

[saltpoint]

17. - - - -

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They are not just words
Pray, count ballots, not bullets
Ticket veep my ass

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