A Love Poem....for my Husband.....I Rise

[CaliforniaPeggy]

from my bed and glory lies
at my feet
tiny flowers spring
as I walk

joy covers me
from mouth to
toes

I will know this bliss
forever

such completion is rare
beyond joy
beyond hope

the future
is why we live
why we love

the skies are gray
the sun shines
inside
me

it pulses my
heart
amplifies me

forever
with you


© 2010 MLC

[Dystopian]

1. Peggy...

Such beauty in your words...
This is true love..

Thank you for sharing your love with us....

peace~

[CaliforniaPeggy]

2. My dear Dystopian...

Ah, I appreciate your kind words!

I am very lucky...Very.

:hug:

[blue neen]

3. Beautiful, Peggy.

You and your husband are very lucky. :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. My dear blue neen...

I'm so glad you like this...

We know how lucky we are...the years have been good to us.

:)

[bluesbassman]

5. Wonderful Peggy.

Very touching. Thanks for sharing this piece of your heart. :hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. My dear bluesbassman...

You're welcome!

I thought it was time for something a little less angst-ridden!

I'm so pleased you liked this, sweetie...

:hug:

[Amerigo Vespucci]

7. Another winner, CP!

I particularly like the lines

"the skies are gray
the sun shines
inside
me"

...since earlier today I dug out an old favorite album, Fleetwood Mac's "Bare Trees." The Buckingham-Nicks years got all the attention but "Bare Trees" is probably their finest album.



:toast:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. My dear Amerigo Vespucci!

I appreciate your very kind words!

And that album cover is wonderful...so spare and lovely...

Thank you, sweetie...

Hope your birthday went well...:hug:

[jotsy]

8. The depth of heart is

astounding. A rose rare and layered that when peeled away, offer the truer hues of enduring commitment.

Pretty steamy stuff Miss Peg.

(Sshhh, I've been drinking):hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. My dear jotsy!

Ah, I thank you! Perhaps the bit of alcohol has lent your perception greater depth? Perhaps...

I appreciate your good thoughts, no matter what enhances them!


:hi:

[DesertFlower]

11. beautiful.

[DesertFlower]

12. beautiful.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

16. Thank you so much, my dear DesertFlower...nt

[Parche]

13. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy

Brightens my day, as it is cloudy today
you strive for joy in your life
to your husband you are a good wife
this one rocks again just like the last
we go through the future together, not the past

:woohoo::woohoo::hi::hug::hug::hug:



The Conservation of Energy Law — a principle which states that energy can be changed in form but that it cannot be either created or destroyed. And this is true of all energy — the energy of genius, of madness, of the heart, of the atom. And so it must be lived with. It must be controlled, channeled for good, held isolated from evil… and somehow lived with, peaceably.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

17. My dear Parche...

Ah, your words touch me...

So glad this one rocks you!

I am a good wife........and he is a good husband...we take care of each other, always!

Thank you...

:hug:

[YankeyMCC]

14. Lucky man

if he realizes what he has that is :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

18. My dear YankeeMCC...

Believe me.....

he does.


Thank you!

[Phentex]

15. Consider this stolen...

My husband doesn't read here and he'll never see your little copyright symbol. :o

But this will be perfect on a homemade card for him. :loveya:

:hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

19. My dear Phentex!

You are more than welcome to use this...

With proper accreditation, that is!

:P

I'm glad you like it...

[applegrove]

20. That's a really lovely poem. What a tribute to your guy.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

21. I thank you so much, my dear applegrove! (NT)

[Terra Alta]

22. that is beautiful

thanks for sharing it... your husband is lucky to have you! :)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

23. My dear Terra Alta!

Ah, I thank you...

He says he's the lucky one....I say I am...we can never agree!

:hi:

[velvet]

24. mmm, nice one Peggy

I particularly like:

"it pulses my
heart
amplifies me"

Amplification, that's the name of the game.

:)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

26. My dear velvet...

Several folks have commented on that phrase...I like it too, but it's not the best part as far as I'm concerned.

I wonder why it strikes such a chord?

Anyway, thank you so much!

:hi:

[MrMickeysMom]

25. That's some love you have portrayed...

And precious, isn't it?

[CaliforniaPeggy]

27. My dear MrMickeysMom...

We both know (my husband and I) how very lucky we are...

We've worked at this love...

It has not always been easy, but it has always been worth it, yes!

Thank you!

[MrMickeysMom]

28. Isn't that the truth?

After 34 years, I can't go more than a few days feeling sad about something, regardless of what either one of us says. Ann Landers was right about never go to bed arguing and other things like that.

You're welcome!

[ellaydubya]

29. Me thiinks you are one very lucky lady and your man is also

Beautiful- and moving- and loving. Thanks for sharing with the rest of us.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

30. My dear ellaydubya...

I know how lucky I am, and yet he says he's the lucky one...

45 years.

Thank you for your very kind words...

[Demoiselle]

31. Your husband is a very lucky man.

Married to a woman who loves him to pieces and is a fine poet to boot!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

32. My dear Demoiselle...

So he says...

I say I'm the lucky one; on this we can never agree... ;-)

Thank you, sweetie!