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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-24-09 01:36 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 7/24/09
"Sonnet XVII"

I do not love you as if you were salt-rose, or topaz,
or the arrow of carnations the fire shoots off.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.

I love you as the plant that never blooms
but carries in itself the light of hidden flowers;
thanks to your love a certain solid fragrance,
risen from the earth, lives darkly in my body.

I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where.
I love you straightforwardly, without complexities or pride;
so I love you because I know no other way

than this: where I does not exist, nor you,
so close that your hand on my chest is my hand,
so close that your eyes close as I fall asleep.

~Pablo Neruda
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-24-09 02:57 PM
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1. Oh, come ON.
How great is this?
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-24-09 03:45 PM
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2. My dear BlueIris...
Oh, this is so beautiful...

It actually made me cry.

I am so moved by this; I cannot really express it.

This is going into my blank book, so I can read it whenever I want to...

Thank you so much, sweetie...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Jul-24-09 04:23 PM
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3. Sure thing.
:-)
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