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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 09:39 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 5/25/2009)
Between Us

Bees in our bed;
their restless feet
where my hip fits,
your ribs bristled by
the fuzz of their backs.

Closer,
harvesting the whole length
of one another's skin
and smell, the bees release
their hum and honey.

An entire season
surrenders with
the burst of our shudders,
and the bees hover,
only wings between us.

Juleta Severson-Baker

*******************

:hi:

RL
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 09:56 AM
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1. ~
:donut: :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 11:31 AM
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2. ...
:hi:

RL
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Haole Girl Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 11:34 AM
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3. I like it
:-)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 11:47 AM
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4. Hey!
:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 01:54 PM
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5. ...
Nice: "the bees release their hum and honey."

I was out of town for a couple of days -- I missed my daily poems! :hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 02:20 PM
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6. They are in my journal for you...
I'll be gone for 5 days next week...

:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 09:34 PM
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7. Oh noes!!!!
:cry:

Ooh! Is this your SLC trip?
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon May-25-09 10:39 PM
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8. No, going to a poetry seminar in Michigan
:hi:

RL
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