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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 09:15 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 3/18/09 (language warning)
Edited on Wed Mar-18-09 09:15 AM by BlueIris
"Journal"

In a dream journal kept as an experiment,
evidence of a life that went
on without him while he slept, salvaged
fragments that might yield reservations
about the past or future, he found himself
recording nights they spent together.

On a page of frozen landscape
across which he towed his father,
now shrunk into a child, on a sled
meant to transport a dead battery,
was the August night she'd wiped
their sweat with unbound hair.

Rowing a turbulent sea of doors,
he woke to tingle of wings, a bat
brushing the wind chime in her room,
and hovering lips alighting along
the length of his body. He was lost
on a shore where clarinets were

driftwood, and sunrise a camisole
slipped from her shoulder. Each time
she came, she cried; erect nipples
tasting of tears, earlobes familiar
with their taste of pearls.
The mortgage on his soul was down

to a dollar but where to pay it off?
Baby, she said, we're practicing
kissing interruptus. To save the world
from humankind, a desperate cabal
of cetaceans merged the psychic power
of their enormous brains.

His handprint still emblazoned
on her ass as she stepped into the shower.
Prisoners of war, assigned a classroom
in which to await decapitation,
sat passively at fifth-grade desks
while he paced wishing for a gun,

and when the executioners rushed in
it was another night in which the choice
was death or starting from the dream.
3 a.m. He lay listening to her breath,
wondering should he gently wake her
with his tongue, or let her sleep.

~Stuart Dybek
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 09:28 AM
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1. ~
:hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 09:39 AM
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2. 'Sup.
Nice new sign line, BTW.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 10:07 AM
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4. thanks for noticing --
it is a quote by W. Somerset Maugham
Work is crazy as ever. I am not online at my regular times.
How are things with you?
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 10:18 AM
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5. ...egh. Me? Er...
I've been better. But changes in my diet and other health maintenance strategies are helping me straighten out the bumps. Sort of.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 09:54 AM
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3. My dear BlueIris!
Well, this isn't all that graphic, but it's still lovely!

I like it...

Thank you!

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 10:20 AM
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6. No, but I decided to be on the safe side. Some of the ones I have picked out for next week
are definitely graphic, and I don't want to get out of the habit of warning folks about that.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Mar-18-09 10:30 AM
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7. Oh, look. A rec. Made my day. nt
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