I'm writing an erotic poem..

[CaliforniaPeggy]

It's still brand new, and most certainly not ready for prime time...

And it might be too much to post even if it were ready...

Anyhow...

If you want to see it, tell me here, and I will PM it...

Okay?

;)

[PaddyBlueEyes]

1. Hit me up Pegs..

:)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

4. Incoming!

[PaddyBlueEyes]

20. Pegs

That was awesome..Great Work.. :hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

26. Thank you, Paddy...

:hug:

[PaddyBlueEyes]

27. Can I borrow that

to read to someone? :evilgrin:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

32. Why, whoever could you mean?

Of course, silly!

I would be honored to have you read it to her...

And I know you'll tell her where you got it...

:hug:

[PaddyBlueEyes]

44. Of course I will

you are an amazing poet...Thanks :hug:

[Haole Girl]

2. Please?

:-)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

6. It'll be there shortly!

[seaker]

3. Ok

:applause:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

9. Incoming!

[Haole Girl]

12. It's very good

I especially liked the line about the "shade of the trees..."

Thank you! :loveya:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

14. My dear Haole Girl!

Oh, thanks sweetie!

I liked that line too...

I'm so pleased you enjoyed it...just started writing it tonight...

:loveya: too...

[seaker]

22. Oh my...

Thank you....
:blush: :applause:

[elshiva]

5. May I please see it, CaliforniaPeggy?

:hug: :loveya:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

10. Incoming!

[elshiva]

16. Thank you! It's wonderful.

I love you so much. :loveya: You are a great person, a great poet.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

29. Thank you, my dear elshiva!

I hope that someday I will truly be great...

:hug:

[elshiva]

35. Modesty thy name is CaliforniaPeggy! You are already great.

:hug: Thank you for sharing your poetry with us. :loveya:

[NYC_SKP]

7. Please, Peg...

I loves your way with words... :P

[CaliforniaPeggy]

11. You'll have it shortly!

[NYC_SKP]

17. Oh my...

I'm flushed...

There's something about the outdoors and the moments that can be, so nicely phrased in your poem.

Thank you so much for such a thoughtful expression of the wonders of nature. :hug:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

21. Oh, thank you, sweetie...

I like to mix those elements too...they work for me!

I really appreciate your comments...

:hug:

[Aristus]

8. Bring it!

B-)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

13. Give me a moment...

[seaker]

15. Panting with anticipation

:bounce:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

18. My dear seaker!

I sent yours...you should have it by now!

Go see!

:bounce:

[seaker]

25. Yes...

You sure did...thank you again very much, Sweetie.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

30. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you!

:hug:

[NYC_SKP]

19. Wait til you read it!

Better be sitting down, have a cool drink available! :P

[seaker]

28. So true...

:wow:

[NYC_SKP]

33. It reminds me of a time near Goat Rock (Jenner). I'll bet Peg's been there.

Funny thing about it.

No goats there!

:P

[CaliforniaPeggy]

38. Goat Rock?

Is that in California? I've not heard of it...

No goats, huh?

I'll bet there were...of the human kind!

:P

[NYC_SKP]

49. Yes there were two... your poem evokes the memories.

Goat Rock and Goat Rock beach are just south of where the Russian River meets the Pacific, just south of Jenner.

A winding road goes from hwy 1 to the beach. There's a gravel road that goes off that gravel road, some trees.

Something about the salty air, and the seclusion... :9

This pic more captures the mood:


This one is post-cardy:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

50. Ah, I see!

Those are beautiful pictures...

And I have not been to that place...

Maybe I should one day, with someone I love...

Thank you!

[seaker]

59. Then why is called Goat Rock?

[bluesbassman]

23. Lay it on me Peggy.

Perhaps that should have been phrased differently condidering the subject.:P


Can't wait to read it.:pals:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

24. My dear bluesbassman!

Um...well, I think my husband might not like that, lol!

It'll be there in a moment...

[bluesbassman]

31. Ummm...

That was steamy. :thumbsup:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

34. Well...

That WAS the idea... :evilgrin:

I LOVE the pic...

[Bicoastal]

36. There once was a man from Regina...

WHAT? What?

[elshiva]

39. Hahaha!

:rofl:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

41. You are too naughty!

:spank:

[leftofthedial]

37. Let 'er rip

[CaliforniaPeggy]

40. It'll be there shortly!

[leftofthedial]

42. Peggy, I'm just heading off to grade papers, so it will be tomorrow

before I can read it.

Can't wait!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

46. No worries!

I hope you can concentrate on your papers tonight!

Nah, you're a professional...

It'll be there when you're ready to read...

:hug:

[abq e streeter]

43. uh oh, don't know if I can handle the blushing, but go ahead and send it...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

45. Well, at least you can blush privately!

It'll be right there...

[abq e streeter]

47. Wow! too sleepy to blush... but ...wow.---

but also, seriously, that was really really good. I'm duly impressed.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

48. Thank you so much!

Not too bad for a beginner...

[margotb822]

51. Send it my way

My bf is on deployment, so I'm lonely ;)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

52. You'll have it shortly!

[margotb822]

53. It's incredible!

It's exactly how I feel. I love it!!!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

54. Oh, I'm so glad!

Feel free to share it with your boyfriend when he returns...

:hug:

[margotb822]

55. If you don't mind

I'd like to read it to him over the phone. I think he'd really enjoy hearing it (I'll definitely give you credit though).

[CaliforniaPeggy]

56. I would be honored if you did that...

But you might make him crazy...

But of course, you know him better than I do...

Please read it to him!

And I hope he enjoys it as much as you did...

[NanceGreggs]

57. Oh, you just KNOW I want to read it ...

... and you know where to reach me.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

58. Be right there, babe!

[Gonzo Gardener]

60. Hit me, Peg!

:7

[CaliforniaPeggy]

61. Good thing I came back through for another look!

In a moment, my dear Gonzo Gardener!

[Gonzo Gardener]

94. Poetry with flames that lick...

very hot stuff, Peg!

:loveya:

[Riden]

62. Hit me up!

I'd love to read it.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

66. Welcome to DU!

And you'll have it shortly...


Uh oh...you haven't been a member long enough to receive PM's...I'm so sorry.

I can't send it after all...

[Wetzelbill]

63. I'll take a look at it

:)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

67. Your wish is my command...

It still needs work...

I will happily accept any criticism you might have!

[evlbstrd]

64. Hi, Peggy.

I'd like to read it, if you don't mind. Perhaps send it to a certain friend of mine.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

68. I'd love to have you read it!

And of course you may share it...

[evlbstrd]

71. It's beautiful!

Thanks! Keep writing!

[Maine-ah]

65. I'd love to read it!

:hi:

[CaliforniaPeggy]

70. You'll have it shortly!

[Wapsie B]

69. I've got the cold shower ready so hit me up!

I bet it's pretty good.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

72. Incoming!

[Wapsie B]

74. I think I need a cigarette now.

;-)

[datasuspect]

73. if it's really lewd

i want to read it.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

75. And what if it's not?

Cause it's not lewd...

It's more erotic than it is pornographic!

I'll send it, and you decide, OK?

[Bake]

76. WooHoo!! Put me on the list, CP!!

Thanks,

Bake

[CaliforniaPeggy]

78. Incoming!

[gatorboy]

77. I'm always up for a lusty limerick. PM me!

"I'm always up"


huh huh.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

79. And you are BAD, lol!

Incoming...

[gatorboy]

81. Incoming!

Huh huh!

Beautiful work, by the way. Poetry seems to be a lost art these days.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

83. Thanks!

Glad you liked it ...

I'm doing my best to keep this art going!

[Strong Atheist]

80. Please PM it! Thank you in advance! nt.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

82. Incoming!

My pleasure...

[peacefreak]

84. Just becasue we're "mature"

doesn't mean the fire's gone out. May I have a peek? Waiting anxiously with ice water & fan by my side.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

85. You got that right!

Sorry this is so delayed...I just got home from the gym...

Enjoy!

[peacefreak]

93. Oh my.

I'll have what she's having....(with thanks to When Harry Met Sally)

[crimsonblue]

86. Aren't all (or at least, most) of your poems erotic?

:P I'd like to read it, Peggy.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

87. My dear crimsonblue!

I'm not sure, actually...

Maybe they are!

I'll send it momentarily, and I hope you enjoy it...

:hug:

[Parche]

88. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy

send me, i will be the judge of your good work!! :woohoo: :woohoo: :hi: :hug: :hug: :hug:







Man produces little that is lasting—truly lasting. It's understandable. Fear, conformity, immorality; these are heavy burdens. Great drainers of creative energy. And when we are drained of creative energy we do not create. We procreate; we do not create.
The human race has a gift . . . that sets it above all the other creatures that abound upon this planet: the gift of thought, of reasoning, of understanding. The highly-developed brain. But the human race has ceased to develop. It struggles for petty comfort and false security; there is no time for thought. Soon there will be no time for reasoning, and Man will lose sight of the truth.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

89. It's flying towards you, my dear Parche!

[DarkTirade]

90. I'd love to see it.

:)

[CaliforniaPeggy]

95. You have mail!

[From The Ashes]

91. Can I have a look?

...think I'll save it for after work though. Don't want to be distracted, heh heh...

[CaliforniaPeggy]

96. Of course!

[av8rdave]

92. would love to see it!

[CaliforniaPeggy]

97. You got it!

[Turbineguy]

98. I hope it takes less than 4 hours to read

I'd prefer to call the doctor after my deductible runs out.

[CaliforniaPeggy]

99. LOL!

Um, that would be no!

Or after the medication wears off? :9

[Turbineguy]

100. Thanks! Public answer:

Doi-oi-oi---ng!

[Runcible Spoon]

101. OK CP the fun is over! j/k I would like to read it! :)

yes I am over 18! :evilgrin:

[SoxFan]

102. California Pevvy?