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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 08:08 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sat 10/18/2008)
Lullaby

Of salt’s place in ancient Roman currency,
paid out in rough burlap bags
to soldiers bearing the weight of empire,
I’ll speak for a while tonight.
For as long as I can recall some scrap
of trivia, I’ll utter circa, anno domini,
I’ll trace the bloody lines of Caesars
and serve garum, a sauce of fish
left to curdle in the light of that bronze sun,
which I know only as much of
as childhood reading could teach me.
I care even less for it , it must be said, tonight,
while you sleep on the couch,
your body careless and dreaming,
calm, lulled by my invocation
of the useless, the quotidian, the dust-deep
particulars which I’ve stored
against—what? A winter so long
we forget our names, our numbers,
our address here in this town
that will not do us the sweet favor of fading?
No, there is no reason to know
any of this, to say
not gesundheit or God bless you or even yuck
to the machine gun sneezer
across the dinner table last night
but rather to offer
in perfect serenity to the half-deaf world
the average speed of the human sneeze
as it leaves the nose like a shinkansen,
the Japanese word for their hurtling bullet trains.
Which leads me to say how kamikaze
means divine wind, a fact I loved
before I loved you. And there I go, rattling
like an old fan. And still you sleep,
small and warm, having asked
in your drowsing slip of a voice
that I talk and talk, quietly, without cease,
about anything, anything at all,
until you drift and I am at last the one you dream of.

Paul Guest

**************

:hi:

RL
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Chorophyll Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 09:36 AM
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1. ...
Oh. That's another one. :(

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 09:50 AM
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2. Yeah, I've never heard of him, but Wow!
Good stuff...

:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 10:42 AM
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3. My dear Retro!
Wow!

It just winds around, kind of gentle-like, and then

POW!

I love this ending...

What a great poem...

Thank you!

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 10:51 AM
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4. ...
:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:33 AM
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5. Very nice, Retro.
:)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:37 AM
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6. Hey You!
Congrats on the new job!

:hi:

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:39 AM
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7. Thanks!
I'm still getting over bronchitis and I'm winded climbing two flights of stairs. Can't quite get back to normal. Don't laugh, there *is* a state of normal for me. ;)

Saw the kids at the store the other night, spending birthday money. They're growing up so fast. :)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:45 AM
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8. Ah, they told me they saw you at Target...
Did they say hi, or did they hide behind their mom's legs?

I can climb stairs no problem now. 3 weeks smoke free... :D

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:54 AM
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9. They were great
Retrogirl talked a bit and Retroboy had a captive audience. ;)

Lucky you. I never smoked a day in my life and still can't breathe.

Good for you for quitting! :)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 11:57 AM
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10. I'm not calling it "Quitting"
I'm thinking of it as a long pause in my poor lung self-esteem. :9

RL
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lizziegrace Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Oct-18-08 12:04 PM
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11. ...
:P
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