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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 03:50 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 8/3/08
"On Summer Evenings Several Summers Before the Next War"

The good boys said if you told
the psycho to eat dirt he would.
The big boys said be brave,
bounce rocks of his skinhead,
then run. The smart boys said
the evening wasn't safe,
the psycho lurking with his lizard claws
sharpened for small boys who tell mommy.
The small boys fled. And we boys stood,
exchanging dirty looks, the sky darkening.
Then some boy always said, "So what're
yuh made of? So what'll yuh give me?"

In this way we build legends large enough
for our ambition, although we didn't know
what our ambition was beyond sensation:
watching girls who sashayed home
from Dairy Queen at five-'o-clock,
detonating frogs with cherry bombs,
spit massaging Spalding gloves.
What fathers called the hunting instinct,
what mothers called young love,
what teachers condemned

as delinquent behavior,
drove us through the neighborhood,
a rotary storm, a gang of stumbles
and troubles. We loved all destruction.
And we loved baffling the adults—did God
make room in heaven for the souls of psychos?
Why did God make psychos? What did that prove?
And we loved the psycho, who helped us prove
what we were made of: playing by the Junglegym
where we found sharp stones small enough
to bombard the kid from a safe distance,
who scared us with his unfixed eyes,
aviator's cap and green mittens.

—John Engman
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 01:40 PM
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1. Kick.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 03:15 PM
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2. My dear BlueIris...
So this vivid poem tells us who don't know...

What it's like to be a young male.

What a terrific glimpse into the psyche and mind of such a person...

Thank you!

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 09:12 PM
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3. I thought it would be nice to put up some stuff better suited to my male readers.
All three of them. I post so much women-centric poetry, and variety is good.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 09:31 PM
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4. HEY. This has received a coveted recommendation!!
Thank you to my secret recommender person.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 09:34 PM
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5. Ooooh, you sneaky recommenders, you.
Trying to make BlueIris fall madly in love with you.
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Chan790 Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 09:41 PM
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6. The second one was me...
in case the first one was this sneaky-bastard recommending-fairy that has been reco-bombing the Lounge.

It's a nice poem, it deserves a reco on its' merits.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-03-08 09:42 PM
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7. Thanks! It's good to know you're not a sneaky bastard. nt
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