OK, here's a trial cover for something I'm making, how do you like it?

[originalpckelly]

[CaliforniaPeggy]

1. My dear originalpckelly!

I'm a little puzzled here...

This picture is the cover?

It's a cool pic!

Or is the cover the white rectangle visible about 2/3rds of the way back?

What's the cover going to cover?

:hi:

[originalpckelly]

2. Oh the whole picture is a cover.

It's an album cover. It's just a trial. :P

[DS1]

3. Not a bad picture, but with something this barren, type alignment

is critical

So, first I'll suggest lining it up with visual elements in the photo, this will make a difference




So, the first result would be like this




but, while Helvetica is a nice font, it's rather boring here, so you could play with it some more, like





Thus concludes my $.02