The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 7/23/2008)

[RetroLounge]

Tactile

I wouldn’t touch the gloves he left in the lobby
because his cuticles were bloody, red and sore.
He wanted me to feel the swelling below his lip.
I stepped back, and said I could see it throbbing.

He is tired of telling me that he is tired, and he rolls
his eyes when I tell him to go home, soak in a hot bath.
He winks, Girlfriend, I’d just love me a bubble bath.
I ask again about his prognosis, hoping he remembers.

The last doctor said without meds, six to seven
months, and with my meds, maybe twenty more years.
He smiles. He’ll stop taking his meds again, and I want
him to die, because I can’t refuse to touch him anymore.

Donna Weaver

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:hi:

RL

[Callalily]

1. Tactile is right.

What a powerful poem, especially the last line,

and I want him to die,because I can't refuse to touch him anymore

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[RetroLounge]

2. Yeah, pretty intense...

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RL

[NMDemDist2]

3. d00d

gross

:puke:

[RetroLounge]

8. I don't think gross is the correct term...

I think more it's about aids, perhaps?

RL

[xchrom]

4. ...

He is tired of telling me that he is tired, and he rolls
his eyes when I tell him to go home, soak in a hot bath.
He winks, Girlfriend, I’d just love me a bubble bath.

[RetroLounge]

9. ...

:hi:

RL

[blueraven95]

5. ...

:cry:

[RetroLounge]

10. Yeah.

:cry:

RL

[kat_kringle]

6. check out, kim addonizio's short (1 page) story, 'survivors'

although, since you are enveloped in books, you might have had already..


thanks for the post, brian!!! :P

**edit: although respelled

[RetroLounge]

11. Kim is one of my favorite poets

Haven't read her stories yet. Her novel was awful, I thought.

You're A Kim fan too? :loveya:

RL

[kat_kringle]

16. i was just introduced two semesters ago to her

in a writing fiction class(which i loathed, unfortunately), but i did get a little look into her poetry and a few of her short works.
and i do like her quite a bit. :)

how are you!!?? :hug:

**edited to answer original question :crazy:

[RetroLounge]

17. I'm good!

Hanging out in my bookstore listening to tunes and selling books...

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RL

[kat_kringle]

19. lucky!!

you sell books online, too, eh?

cause, i finally got some work, after a year of unemployment, and need something new to read.

although, there is a library. i am in a metro, after all.

:)

[RetroLounge]

20. I have a few online...

http://www.alibris.com/booksearch?S=R&quserid=XENITHBS

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RL

[kat_kringle]

21. gracias, senor

now, i must depart for a few 'ours.

you going to be online later?

[RetroLounge]

22. of course...

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RL

[BlueIris]

7. Woah. Yikers.

It's usually me posting ones this dark.

[RetroLounge]

12. Hope I didn't steal your thunder...

:hi:

RL

[hotforteacher]

13. Hey Retro

I'm going to throw this into my curriculum this coming school year for my seniors.

Thank you for keeping on Retro, VIVE LA EX LIBRIS!!

[RetroLounge]

14. Really?

That is totally cool!

:hi:

RL

[hotforteacher]

15. Oh yeah.

I like to break them over the head with pieces like this and get conversations started. You should see how they reacted to Burrough's "Junky". Brilliant...but that's how I get the 10th graders during the first week of school when we talk about what we consider to be "good" writing. I check in here periodically for new ideas.

And to make sure that you are keeping Milwaukee literate. ;)

[RetroLounge]

18. Keeping Milwaukee literate is a full time job

but I try...

:hi:

RL