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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 08:25 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 5/7/08
Edited on Wed May-07-08 08:25 AM by BlueIris
"Rhetorical Questions"

How do you think I feel
when you make me talk to you
and won't let me stop
till the words turn into a moan?
Do you think I mind
when you put your hand over my mouth
and tell me not to move
so you can "hear" it happening?

And how do you think I like it
when you tell me what to do
and your mouth opens
and you look straight through me?
Do you think I mind
when the blank expression comes
and you set off alone
down the hall of collapsing columns?

—Hugo Williams
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 05:26 PM
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1. Kick
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 07:23 PM
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2. woah
How do you think I feel
when you make me talk to you
and won't let me stop
till the words turn into a moan?


:hi:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 08:05 PM
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3. My dear BlueIris!
Wow, this is a tough one...

I like it!

Thank you...

:hi:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 08:22 PM
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4. Well, I couldn't keep posting the fun poems forever. nt
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ismnotwasm Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 08:33 PM
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5. The title
Sets it off perfectly. Rhetorical questions indeed.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed May-07-08 10:36 PM
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6. Oh, wow, I never even noticed that.
Nice catch!
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