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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-06-08 07:26 PM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 1/6/08
"A Sunday Drive"

The skin seethes in the heat
which roars out from the sun, wave after tidal wave;
the sea is flat and hot and too bright,
stagnant as a puddle,
edged by a beach reeking of shit.
The city is like a city, bombed out and burning;
the smell of smoke is everywhere,
drifting from the mounds of rubble.
Now and then a new tower,
already stained, lifts from the tangle;
the cars stall and bellow.
From the trampled earth rubbish erupts
and huts of tin and warped boards
and cloth and anything scavenged.
Everything is the color of dirt
except the kites, red and purple,
three of them, fluttering cheerfully
from a slope of garbage,
and the women’s dresses, cleaned somehow,
vaporous and brilliant, and the dutiful
white smiles of the child beggars
who kiss your small change
and press it to their heads and hearts.
Uncle, they call you. Mother.
I have never felt less motherly.
The moon is responsible for all this,
goddess of increase
and death, which here are the same.
Why try to redeem
anything? In this maze
of condemned flesh without beginning or end
where the pulp of the body steams and bloats
and spawns and multiplies itself
the wise man chooses serenity.

Here you are taught the need to be holy,
to wash a lot and live apart.
Burial by fire is the last mercy:
decay is reserved for the living.

The desire to be loved is the last illusion:
Give it up and you will be free.


—Margaret Atwood


Bombay, 1982
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-06-08 08:37 PM
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1. Oh, and I have a question for DU tech heads re: presentation of the poems.
How do I make the font for one line of the poem a teensy-bit smaller than the other lines?

I know what the code should look like for this on other boards, but not this one.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-06-08 09:28 PM
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2. whoa.
How did I know it was Bombay? When in this poem did I figure it out?
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-06-08 09:39 PM
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3. Yeah, this one kinda...does that to you.
Atwood is the great poetic master of subtle atmospheric description.
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Tuesday Afternoon Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Jan-06-08 09:42 PM
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4. she tears me up!
Edited on Sun Jan-06-08 09:43 PM by Tuesday Afternoon
I have to continue reading.

kind of like watching a train wreck.

I am horrified and yet I must continue.

Thanks, BlueIris.

:hi:

edited for spelling
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Jan-07-08 01:18 AM
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5. Kick.
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