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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-30-07 08:22 PM
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Am I crazy?
I wrote this when I was 13

Ode to Insanity

I went numb not long ago
A wasted body among the wasted minds
I no longer recognize my foe
I am lost in the way the plot unwinds

My heart continues to pump
My colorless blood through my veins
Apart from where the masses clump
Apart from their conforming lanes

I stand alone

The wind beat me down
Chilling my bones
The sun tried to fry me
No one hearing my moans

In the pain of it all
My Mind tried to collapse
Hating reality, wanting to fall
Suddenly time began to lapse

Pushed and pulled
Twisted around
My senses dulled
I couldn't be found

I sacrificed joy
And human touch
To be rid of the pain
Fuck you all very much
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-30-07 08:31 PM
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1. Yes.
Now I'll read your poem... :P
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-30-07 08:31 PM
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2. Actually that's pretty good.
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Rising Phoenix Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-30-07 08:33 PM
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3. thanks....lol
I was quite young......silly boy
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DarkTirade Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Dec-30-07 08:37 PM
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4. I wrote poetry about monkeys when I was 15 or so.
But that was because I just didn't like my english teacher. :P
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