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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-11-07 09:24 AM
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The BlueIris Semi-Nightly Poetry Break, 11/11/07
"Thanks"

Thanks for the tree
between me & a sniper's bullet.
I don't know what made the grass
sway seconds before the Viet Cong
raised his soundless rifle.
Some voice always followed,
telling me which foot
to put down first.
Thanks for deflecting the ricochet
against that anarchy of dusk.
I was back in San Francisco
wrapped up in a woman's wild colors,
causing some dark bird's love call
to be shattered by daylight
when my hands reached up
& pulled a branch away
from my face. Thanks
for the vague white flower
that pointed to the gleaming metal
reflecting how it is to be broken
like mist over the grass,
as we played some deadly
game for blind gods.
What made me spot the monarch
writhing on a single thread
tied to a farmer's gate,
holding the day together
like an unfingered guitar string,
is beyond me. Maybe the hills
grew weary & leaned a little in the heat.
Again, thanks for the dud
hand grenade tossed at my feet
outside Chu Lai. I'm still
falling through its silence.
I don't know why the intrepid
sun touched the bayonet,
but I know that something
stood among those lost trees
& moved only when I moved.

—Yusef Komunyakaa
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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-11-07 09:48 AM
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1. I'm not a religious person
But there are times when I want to believe in a higher power. Like yesterday. My co-driver and I had almost returned from a 480 mile trip when our truck's fuel filter sensor kicked off and told us we had a bad fuel filter. We were about 20 miles from the yard. We made it back to the yard and as we dropped our trailers the truck started running roughly. We barely made it to our parking spot with the truck losing all power and coughing and kicking and sputtering. Talk about timing.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-11-07 09:58 AM
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2. Woah!
Freaky.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-11-07 11:53 AM
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3. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Nov-11-07 04:05 PM
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4. Kick.
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Nov-12-07 09:13 AM
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5. Kick.
Since more people seem to be recognizing "today" as Veteran's Day than the day I posted this.
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