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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 10:59 PM Original message |
My newest poem....for my creative writing class: |
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Droopy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:07 PM Response to Original message |
1. Based on what I've read from you |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:09 PM Response to Reply #1 |
2. My dear Droopy! |
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Droopy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:13 PM Response to Reply #2 |
5. I guess I'm kind of weird for a guy |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:14 PM Response to Reply #5 |
7. I prefer the erotic stuff, myself... |
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fizzgig (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:10 PM Response to Original message |
3. excellect work peggy |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:12 PM Response to Reply #3 |
4. My dear kagehime! |
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The Straight Story (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:14 PM Response to Original message |
6. Spot on again, and I love the way you keep writing about me |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:16 PM Response to Reply #6 |
9. My dear Straight Story! |
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wildhorses (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:15 PM Response to Original message |
8. those last two lines |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:17 PM Response to Reply #8 |
11. My dear wildhorses... |
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huskerlaw (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:17 PM Response to Original message |
10. Oooh, it's lovely! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:21 PM Response to Reply #10 |
13. My dear huskerlaw! |
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Jade Fox (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:17 PM Response to Original message |
12. "heaving waves"..... |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sun Sep-09-07 11:24 PM Response to Reply #12 |
14. My dear Jade Fox... |
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UrbScotty (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 12:39 AM Response to Original message |
15. You ought to compile your poems into a book, my dear CaliforniaPeggy! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 12:44 AM Response to Reply #15 |
16. My dear ih8thegop! |
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Miss Marmelstein (650 posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 02:48 AM Response to Original message |
17. That is quite a lovely poem CalPeg.... |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 04:03 AM Response to Reply #17 |
19. My dear Miss Marmelstein! |
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Bluebear (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 03:02 AM Response to Original message |
18. I need a cigarette after that poem. |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 04:05 AM Response to Reply #18 |
20. My dear Bluebear! |
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Callalily (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 04:39 AM Response to Original message |
21. I really love |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:55 AM Response to Reply #21 |
26. My dear Simply Fugue! |
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zabet (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 07:20 AM Response to Original message |
22. This is the first one of your poems.. |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:57 AM Response to Reply #22 |
27. My dear citizen_jane... |
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VenusRising (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:04 AM Response to Original message |
23. Bravo!!!!! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:59 AM Response to Reply #23 |
28. My dear VenusRising! |
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lost-in-nj (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:06 AM Response to Original message |
24. Beautiful CP |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 11:01 AM Response to Reply #24 |
29. My dear lost! |
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BarenakedLady (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 10:09 AM Response to Original message |
25. Gorgeous Peggy |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 11:03 AM Response to Reply #25 |
30. My dear BarenakedLady... |
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Cabcere (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 01:21 PM Response to Original message |
31. That is an amazing poem, CaliforniaPeggy! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 01:23 PM Response to Reply #31 |
32. My dear Cabcere! |
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LisaM (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 01:34 PM Response to Original message |
33. I like this poem, but I would remove two lines from it |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 01:38 PM Response to Reply #33 |
34. My dear LisaM... |
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Parche (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 03:59 PM Response to Original message |
35. My Dear CaliforniaPeggy |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 05:56 PM Response to Reply #35 |
36. My dear Parche... |
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skygazer (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 06:10 PM Response to Original message |
37. Very nice work, CalPeg |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 06:14 PM Response to Reply #37 |
38. My dear skygazer! |
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skygazer (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 06:16 PM Response to Reply #38 |
39. Ellipses |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 06:19 PM Response to Reply #39 |
40. Well, hell! |
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BlueIris (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 07:15 PM Response to Original message |
41. Very nice. Continued best of luck with your writing! |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Mon Sep-10-07 07:20 PM Response to Reply #41 |
42. My dear BlueIris... |
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Inchworm (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 01:44 AM Response to Original message |
43. I would love |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 01:51 AM Response to Reply #43 |
44. My dear Inchworm! |
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struggle4progress (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 01:53 AM Response to Original message |
45. What happened to all the sharks and hurricanes? |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 01:55 AM Response to Reply #45 |
46. My dear struggle4progress! |
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struggle4progress (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 02:20 AM Response to Reply #46 |
47. Honestly I never understand why poems have so many words in them |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 02:44 AM Response to Reply #47 |
48. I really appreciate your comments! I mean that... |
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Perseid (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Tue Sep-11-07 02:48 AM Response to Reply #48 |
49. please, if you love writing and reading poems |
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