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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-19-07 11:37 PM
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It's been way too long since I've written a fresh poem
All of my work is fading away, much like the subject of this new work in progress I just began.

Hope you enjoy it.

UNTITLED

Remembering
faded sepia moments
from years ago
frozen shapshot thoughts
of special instants
once carved in paper
now sitting curled and bent,
stacked in a forgotten drawer
blurred memories
of forgotten times and things-
friends long lost
and pets long gone
and places not visited
in way too many years
instants half-remembered
but mostly forgotten
in time

© 2007 Steven A. Hessler
All Rights Reserved


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Cabcere Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-19-07 11:41 PM
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1. Awesome poem, Prisoner Number Six.
Great use of imagery & very moving. Thanks for sharing this with us! :hi:
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-19-07 11:49 PM
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2. My dear Prisoner_Number_Six!
Now, this is truly awesome!

The images are so vivid and evocative...

I really really like this one...

Thank you soooo much!

:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Aug-19-07 11:57 PM
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3. I sometimes think I've run out of new things to say
It becomes a real strain sometimes- a lot gets said and done over the course of half a century, and sooner or later one ends up merely repeating themselves.

And sooner or later one ends up merely repeating themselves.

And sooner or later one ends up...
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-20-07 12:01 AM
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4. Oh now, stop!
You are not repeating yourself...

Sounds to me as though you need your batteries recharged...

If you truly feel that way, then stop writing for awhile...

Sooner or later, those words will be banging around inside you, demanding to be let out...

And you will be renewed...:hug:
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Prisoner_Number_Six Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-20-07 12:08 AM
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5. You misunderstand
Edited on Mon Aug-20-07 12:08 AM by Prisoner_Number_Six
This is one of just two new poems I've written in the past seven YEARS. It's really been that long since I've had any real fresh, genuine inspiration. Until now, all the things I've posted here are from an old manuscript of my collected works.

The only reason I sat down and wrote this one is the words have been floating around inside my head for a couple years now, and I just now got pissed off enough to write them down, just to prove to myself I could still do it.
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-20-07 12:10 AM
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6. You're right...I did misunderstand!
Thank you for the correction!

And see?

What I said would happen...did!

I think you have many good poems yet inside you, waiting to be born...

You can indeed still do it...

:hug:
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BlueIris Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Aug-20-07 01:01 AM
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7. Poetry fever overtakes the Lounge!!!
I'll take that credit, thank you. Oh, wait, and there was that guy, I think his screenname was...MetroLounge? I don't know; I think he posted some poems before me.
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