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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri May-11-07 11:42 PM Original message |
Okay I need some help.... |
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VelmaD (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri May-11-07 11:46 PM Response to Original message |
1. stick with the alcoholic... |
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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 12:43 AM Response to Reply #1 |
3. She is now toying with him.... |
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CaliforniaPeggy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Fri May-11-07 11:59 PM Response to Original message |
2. I'm with Velma on this one... |
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Redstone (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 12:46 AM Response to Original message |
4. I'd have to see the full text to be able to offer an opinion...sorry, but any good editor will |
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Robeson (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 12:49 AM Response to Original message |
5. Focus on him.... |
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TrogL (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 12:54 AM Response to Original message |
6. Kill the woman |
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supernova (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 12:59 AM Response to Original message |
7. You have to put her in the shower |
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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:14 AM Response to Reply #7 |
11. I tried that but she pulls him in for more sex and he, of course, |
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supernova (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:24 AM Response to Reply #11 |
13. Then you've got |
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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 06:51 AM Response to Reply #13 |
16. Not explicit sex..... |
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JVS (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:01 AM Response to Original message |
8. Make it about the woman, but the obsession can be getting off on not letting the guy know who she is |
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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:13 AM Response to Reply #8 |
10. Good one.... |
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NMDemDist2 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:02 AM Response to Original message |
9. she's the daughter of the girl he dumped at the coming out ball |
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wildhorses (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 01:24 AM Response to Original message |
12. happiness is a warm gun |
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rug (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 03:44 AM Response to Original message |
14. She's his daughter from a one night stand years ago. |
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enigmatic (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 03:48 AM Response to Original message |
15. Here's my take |
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WCGreen (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 10:29 AM Response to Reply #15 |
19. Cool..... |
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In_The_Wind (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 07:23 AM Response to Original message |
17. Stick with fleshing out the guy's story. |
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2008 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Sat May-12-07 08:06 AM Response to Original message |
18. lead the reader on a leash with these 4 steps... |
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