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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-25-07 08:34 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Wed 4/25/2007)
The Perfect Day

You wake with
no aches
in the arms
of your beloved
to the smell of fresh coffee
you eat a giant breakfast
with no thought
of carbs
there is time to read
with a purring cat on your lap
later you walk by the ocean
with your dog
on this cut crystal day
your favorite music and the sun
fill the house
a short delicious nap
under a fleece throw
comes later
and the phone doesn't ring
at dusk you roast a chicken,
bake bread, make an exquisite
chocolate cake
for some friends
you've been missing
someone brings you an
unexpected present
and the wine is just right with the food
after a wonderful party
you sink into sleep
in a clean nightgown
in fresh sheets
your sweetheart doesn't snore
and in your dreams
an old piece of sadness
lifts away

Alice N. Persons

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-25-07 08:39 AM
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1. that sounds nice --
:loveya:

one question though:

if i wake in the arms of my beloved, who made the coffee?:P

:hi:

the no aches thing sounds like heaven
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mike_c Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-25-07 08:41 AM
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2. that utterly made my morning....
Thank you.
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Serial Mom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Wed Apr-25-07 09:15 AM
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3. This is my dream
I hope to be doing this often!

:hi:

Got your message yesterday - things change (especially over the past year!)
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