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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-22-07 09:59 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Sun 4/22/07)
The Woman at the Dig

Tired from running a combine
all day through acres of wheat,
alone in front of the TV, I pay
attention because the show's about
scientists digging up an ancient site.
I have no special interest in bones,
pottery, spearheads, or prehistoric
garbage dumps, and I always look past
the man describing animal migrations,
burial rites, or building design and try
to catch a glimpse of the women
working at the site - one of them
might be wearing cut-off jeans
and a halter top, clearing a patch
of ground with a trowel or brush.
These women are all experts.
You can tell by the way they look
at a bone chip or a pottery shard
they understand worlds about
the person who left it. Sifting soil,
they show more grace than contestants
in a Miss Universe pageant.
Years from now, when these farms
are ancient history, an expedition
with such a woman might come along.
I could drop something for her to find,
a pocketknife, a brass overalls button.
If only she could discover my bones.
My eyes would be long gone,
But I can see her form coming into focus
above me as she gently sweeps aside
the last particles of dust - her knee, thigh,
hip, shoulders, and finally, set off by sky
and spikes of sunlight, her face - a woman
who recognizes what she's found.

Leo Dangel

****************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul

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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-22-07 07:10 PM
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1. ----
a rare find indeed!!

thanks, retro

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-22-07 10:48 PM
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3. ...
:hi:

:hug:

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-22-07 07:14 PM
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2. My dear Retro!
Oh, wow....

This is amazing....

Suddenly I can just see the woman looking over the site, and discovering our poet...

I feel as though she's discovering me...

Just beautiful......

Thank you, as always...:hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun Apr-22-07 10:49 PM
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4. ...
:hug:

RL
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