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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:40 PM
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Does this headline seems unclear to you?
From CNN: "Enslaving Egyptian girl, 10, gets prison sentence".

I read that as an Egyptian girl, ten years old, whose been running around enslaving people has received a prison sentence. Either that or 10 people are getting a prison sentence for enslaving an egyptian girl.

Neither are accurate.
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anarch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:43 PM
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1. indeed...not as misleading as "Crowd Rushing to See Pope Trample Six
Edited on Tue Oct-24-06 03:44 PM by anarch
to Death" though. That's still my all-time favorite newspaper headline. Like, dude, I'd probably rush to see that myself!
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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:44 PM
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3. That is good.
That would be impressive to see.
He'd have to clean his robes thoroughly afterwords.
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:45 PM
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4. And man, I could SO see Ratzinger doing that, too.
I'd pay to see it!
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HarukaTheTrophyWife Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:55 PM
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6. Ratzinger probably has done trampled six to death.
We just don't know about it.
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idgiehkt Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:44 PM
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2. I freaking hate headlines like this
and writers write them...people who write for a living write these headlines. It kills me. All they woulda had to do is take 'gets prison sentence', put it at the front of the sentence and put "man" or "woman" or whatever in front of it. If it was a space concern, they could have taken out her age or nationality and even put a 'for' in there. It seems to be getting worse, this headline thing. If you look at really old newspapers they didn't do this at all, the headlines were usually very literate.
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anarch Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:54 PM
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5. aww, come on...some of this stuff is pure gold
:D

consider:
"Blind woman gets new kidney from dad she hasn't seen in years"

or:
"Police begin campaign to run down jaywalkers"

just from a quick search that turned up this page: http://funnies.paco.to/Headlines.html
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mainegreen Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 03:56 PM
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7. Those are great!
"Never withhold herpes from loved one"

:rofl:
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Oeditpus Rex Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Tue Oct-24-06 04:08 PM
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8. Check these
Good and bad heds, cutlines and ledes (mostly bad), provided by people in the bidness:

American Journalism Review

Scroll down a tad to "Take 2" on the right.

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