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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 07:37 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Mon 4/3/06)
Rhapsody on a Windy Night

Twelve o'clock.
Along the reaches of the street
Held in a lunar synthesis,
Whispering lunar incantations
Disolve the floors of memory
And all its clear relations,
Its divisions and precisions,
Every street lamp that I pass
Beats like a fatalistic drum,
And through the spaces of the dark
Midnight shakes the memory
As a madman shakes a dead geranium.

Half-past one,
The street lamp sputtered,
The street lamp muttered,
The street lamp said,
'Regard that woman
Who hesitates toward you in the light of the door
Which opens on her like a grin.
You see the border of her dress
Is torn and stained with sand,
And you see the corner of her eye
Twists like a crooked pin.'

The memory throws up high and dry
A crowd of twisted things;
A twisted branch upon the beach
Eaten smooth, and polished
As if the world gave up
The secret of its skeleton,
Stiff and white.
A broken spring in a factory yard,
Rust that clings to the form that the strength has left
Hard and curled and ready to snap.

Half-past two,
The street-lamp said,
'Remark the cat which flattens itself in the gutter,
Slips out its tongue
And devours a morsel of rancid butter.'
So the hand of the child, automatic,
Slipped out and pocketed a toy that was running along
the quay.
I could see nothing behind that child's eye.
I have seen eyes in the street
Trying to peer through lighted shutters,
And a crab one afternoon in a pool,
An old crab with barnacles on his back,
Gripped the end of a stick which I held him.

Half-past three,
The lamp sputtered,
The lamp muttered in the dark.

The lamp hummed:
'Regard the moon,
La lune ne garde aucune rancune,
She winks a feeble eye,
She smiles into corners.
She smooths the hair of the grass.
The moon has lost her memory.
A washed-out smallpox cracks her face,
Her hand twists a paper rose,
That smells of dust and old Cologne,
She is alone With all the old nocturnal smells
That cross and cross across her brain.
The reminiscence comes
Of sunless dry geriniums
And dust in crevices,
Smells of chestnuts in the streets
And female smells in shuttered rooms
And cigarettes in corridors
And cocktail smells in bars.'

The lamp said,
'Four o'clock,
Here is the number on the door.
Memory!
You have the key,
The little lamp spreads a ring on the stair,
Mount.
The bed is open; the tooth-brush hangs on the wall,
Put your shoes at the door, sleep, prepare for life.'

The last twist of the knife.

Thomas Stearns Eliot

********************

RL

If you have a request for a certain Poet, post their name in the thread and I will find a poem by them and post it...

if you want to see some of my poetry, see the blog at:
http://www.myspace.com/retropaul
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 08:10 AM
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1. Thanks for this
:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:07 AM
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2. ...
And through the spaces of the dark
Midnight shakes the memory
As a madman shakes a dead geranium.

:hi:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:40 AM
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4. ...
That corpse you planted last year in your garden,
Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year?
Or has the sudden frost disturbed its bed?

:hi:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:41 AM
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5. You made me go out last night to the bookstore
Had to get a copy of The Wasteland to read...

:hug:

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:42 AM
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6. Made you?
I'll use my powers for good next time. ;)
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:44 AM
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7. Oh, it *was* good
I needed something to read at 2:30 this morning when I was not sleeping...

RL
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miss_american_pie Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:46 AM
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9. Ahhh
I hope it didn't give you nigtmares then. :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:48 AM
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11. No more than usual
:D

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:37 AM
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3. Ah.....TS Eliot......
Marvelous, murky.......wonderful!

It is almost more to be felt than understood......

Thank you

:loveya: :hug:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:49 AM
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12. ...
:hi: :hug: :loveya:

RL
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wildhorses Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:45 AM
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8. that is how it feels to work 3rd shift
there is no understanding just broken, twisted, senseless feelings and the clock that keeps on ticking



:thumbsup:




thanks RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 11:48 AM
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10. ...
:hug:

RL
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xchrom Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 01:11 PM
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13. workin my nerve here...
The reminiscence comes
Of sunless dry geriniums
And dust in crevices,
Smells of chestnuts in the streets
And female smells in shuttered rooms
And cigarettes in corridors
And cocktail smells in bars.'


memory is it's own being -- demanding it's own obedience.
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 01:29 PM
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14. Memory
The last twist of the knife.

:hi:

RL
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Mon Apr-03-06 05:40 PM
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15. Kick
:kick:

RL
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