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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 08:34 AM
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The RetroLounge Daily Poem Thread (Fri 12/9/05)
The Idea of Order at Key West

She sang beyond the genius of the sea.
The water never formed to mind or voice,
Like a body wholly body, fluttering
Its empty sleeves; and yet its mimic motion
Made constant cry, caused constantly a cry,
That was not ours although we understood,
Inhuman, of the veritable ocean.
The sea was not a mask. No more was she.
The song and water were not medleyed sound
Even if what she sang was what she heard,
Since what she sang was uttered word by word.
It may be that in all her phrases stirred
The grinding water and the gasping wind;
But it was she and not the sea we heard.

For she was the maker of the song she sang.
The ever-hooded, tragic-gestured sea
Was merely a place by which she walked to sing.
Whose spirit is this? we said, because we knew
It was the spirit that we sought and knew
That we should ask this often as she sang.
If it was only the dark voice of the sea
That rose, or even colored by many waves;
If it was only the outer voice of sky
And cloud, of the sunken coral water-walled,
However clear, it would have been deep air,
The heaving speech of air, a summer sound
Repeated in a summer without end
And sound alone. But it was more than that,
More even than her voice, and ours, among
The meaningless plungings of water and the wind,
Theatrical distances, bronze shadows heaped
On high horizons, mountainous atmospheres
Of sky and sea.

It was her voice that made
The sky acutest at its vanishing.
She measured to the hour its solitude.
She was the single artificer of the world
In which she sang. And when she sang, the sea,
Whatever self it had, became the self
That was her song, for she was the maker. Then we,
As we beheld her striding there alone,
Knew that there never was a world for her
Except the one she sang and, singing, made.

Ramon Fernandez, tell me, if you know,
Why, when the singing ended and we turned
Toward the town, tell why the glassy lights,
The lights in the fishing boats at anchor there,
As the night descended, tilting in the air,
Mastered the night and portioned out the sea,
Fixing emblazoned zones and fiery poles,
Arranging, deepening, enchanting night.

Oh! Blessed rage for order, pale Ramon,
The maker's rage to order words of the sea,
Words of the fragrant portals, dimly-starred,
And of ourselves and of our origins,
In ghostlier demarcations, keener sounds.

Wallace Stevens

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One of, if not my all-time favorite poems...

Read it Out Loud!

RL
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CaliforniaPeggy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 11:25 AM
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1. Ah, my dear RetroLounge......
This one is a bit harder to get....maybe that's why I'm the first responder on the scene!

I did as you suggested, and read part of it aloud. And that does help my comprehension.

You have a superior brain, my dear!

Thank you for sharing your brain, and this poem with us today.......
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 12:47 PM
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3. Somewhere I have a recording of Stevens
reading this poem, and it is pretty amazing...

:hi:

RL
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XemaSab Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 11:29 AM
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2. Kick for Wallace Stevens!
:woohoo:
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RetroLounge Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 12:48 PM
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4. Thank you!
:bounce:

RL
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tigereye Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Fri Dec-09-05 01:40 PM
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5. ah
Edited on Fri Dec-09-05 01:40 PM by tigereye
Stevens is one of my all time favorite poets! Thanks Retro!
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Cats Against Frist Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat Dec-10-05 12:18 AM
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6. A big kick for Wallace
This is one of the very best. Thanks!

:hi:
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