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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:10 PM
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post a single line and i'll give you a rhyming quatrain (see example)
(if that's what a quick four-line poem is actually called)

Bouncy Ball posted:

"I hate Bush"

I completed it:

so look at my tush
and all your hate
will melt into mush


Go!
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ElsewheresDaughter Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:11 PM
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1. I hate an orange....
Edited on Sat May-21-05 08:13 PM by ElsewheresDaughter
:hide:
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:12 PM
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2. but dig a kiwi
peel off the fuzzy stuff
and have some with me

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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:12 PM
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3. Hah! Don't even get me started on CPS and my run-ins with them.
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:19 PM
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6. You don't know what will happen if you turn that key, my friend.
My eyeballs will boy-yoing and fire will shoot out my ass.
The resulting pissed-off man-rocket will spell CPS's well-deserved end!

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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:43 PM
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11. Fantastic!
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KittyWampus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:14 PM
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4. Enjoying The Color Of Springtime Flowers
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:21 PM
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7. must now be done in my memory
the touch of a tulip upon my cheek
brings joy enough, though I once could see

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Rowdyboy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:17 PM
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5. Well, you already skillfully dodged "orange" so I'll give you another...
"I'm a very bad boy, though my hair is silver...."
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:31 PM
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9. (Long Beach named a bar after me)
come, be a good man, sit with me (oh--heart-quiver)--
god damn! who calls at quarter to three?!

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* "The Silver Fox," Redondo & 4th, Long Beach, CA
http://www.silverfoxlongbeach.com/Welcome%20.htm
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Droopy Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:26 PM
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8. I hate to mow the lawn
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:32 PM
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10. it's the nastiest chore
so I start it at dawn
try to finish by four

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KittyWampus Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:46 PM
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13. Pretty Good!
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:45 PM
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12. So I'm on the train this morning reading "Twin's Hardcore Shower Stories"
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:53 PM
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14. The guy across from me says, "Where's your yellow hankie?" --
Edited on Sat May-21-05 08:53 PM by bertha katzenengel
and winks.
I go red and say, "I don't know what you're talking about;" "golden showwww-ers," leers he
"Oh, uh, no, no, you misunderstand," stammers I; "this is about, uh, plumbing hijinks."
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:53 PM
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15. LOL!
Bertha, you're the best!
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boilerbabe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-22-05 10:35 AM
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23. tis not the plumbing...
tis the hijinks, under the low sinks. One must get a perspective to gain the objective...
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-22-05 10:38 AM
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24. Touche!
:bounce:
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Rabrrrrrr Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:54 PM
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16. If ZombyWoof says he battened the hatches
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 09:01 PM
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18. we'd best go round and check them
the storm's coming up, wind's at fifteen knots--
reent! reent! reent! baby, get up, you're going fishing with Ben...
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AverageJoe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 08:55 PM
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17. The curtains are waving
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 09:04 PM
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19. the couch is weeping --
the chair is leaving
and no one knew

she gave no notice
not a single, "hey, listen"
now the living room has a hole
and the whole house is blue


(two for the price of one)
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AverageJoe Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 09:05 PM
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20. Very, very nice
Yes, indeed.
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halobeam Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 09:52 PM
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22. Gotta say this one's my favorite.
Looking forward to more.
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sun May-22-05 11:00 AM
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25. thanks, halobeam
:bounce:
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bertha katzenengel Donating Member (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore Sat May-21-05 09:21 PM
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21. This has been a blast!
But I have to go to bed.
Perhaps tomorrow we shall continue
with another rhyming quatrain thread.

'night, all.
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