Activists and Writers - Please critique the content of www.bushville.org

[GeorgeBushytail]

www.bushville.org

It's about the "9/11 Build Bushville, DC" civil disobedience.

I'd like to know what you like and don't like about it.

Even edit nits. Long days here.

The style stays dead simple.

GBT

DU thread on Bushville:
http://www.democraticunderground.com/discuss/duboard.php?az=show_topic&forum=104&topic_id=4699756

[titoresque]

1. I don't have a lot to

add as far as what should be changed. I think it's wonderful! I do think the change you made in wording works well!
Awesome and printable!

Thanks so much for all your hard work with this.....would love to see this take off!

[fed-up]

2. How about "participate in" instead of "commit"

"Commit" and "crime" seem to be tie together automatically in my brain

emphasis and all wording should be about NON-Violence

[GeorgeBushytail]

3. bulls-eye

Thanks.

Please spread the word.

[GeorgeBushytail]

4. Done. Good eye.