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usregimechange (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:08 PM Original message |
Help me proof read my oped. |
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Der Blaue Engel (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:10 PM Response to Original message |
1. "ponds" should be "pawns" |
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lildreamer316 (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:10 PM Response to Original message |
2. Looks good to me.. |
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Alizaryn (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:12 PM Response to Original message |
3. Sounds great to me! |
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usregimechange (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:16 PM Response to Reply #3 |
5. Hummm, interesting idea. |
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Zensea (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:13 PM Response to Original message |
4. Pawns on a chess board, not ponds. |
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Autonomy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:28 PM Response to Reply #4 |
9. that's "pawns on a chessboard" one word, not two |
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Autonomy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:17 PM Response to Original message |
6. yeah, "pawns" |
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Rabrrrrrr (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:18 PM Response to Original message |
7. Id' make this switch: |
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Autonomy (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:25 PM Response to Original message |
8. two more things: |
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usregimechange (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:46 PM Response to Original message |
10. Thanks guys submitting now... |
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kath (1000+ posts) Send PM | Profile | Ignore | Wed Sep-07-05 11:47 PM Response to Original message |
11. I think you need a comma before "even if it was fully funded" in the |
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