Proofing and constructive comments welcome! ( Defining "projection")

[underahedgerow]

2. From 'Communications 101' ; Brevity Is the Key To Communication.

Why use 20 sentences when you can use 2? It's a wall of text and word salad.

And your words are too advanced for the average vocabulary; it appears as though you're trying to use big words to impress.

You're using too much in the first person. Are you positing facts or opinion?

Facts are not delivered in the first person.

And please accept my apologies, I know this is harsh, but you asked. I regard this objectively, and mean no personal offense.